Thursday, October 28, 2010

More Story Set-Up

Aight. So I got some more feedback about the story and I definitely need to establish a connection between the dragonfruit and the boy as well as the rooster and the boy.

I'm thinking: The boy is eating some dragonfruit and is feeding his rooster some while petting it. He lifts his pipe and it turns into an old man. His rooster flies away from his lap unexpectedly. The boy looks up and sees the worm eat his rooster. He reacts but is swept off his feet by the dragonfruit plant. He observes as the worm turns into a brain and then jumps onto the pipe. As the boy gets engulfed by the plant. As a last cry for help, he blows on the pipe. The brain lifts, lights up and explodes.

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